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A Sin's tale...

Post  Spawny on Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:28 pm

A sin's tale... (part 1) by Spawny :3
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A new day, a new morning, a new chance... for killing some peeps!



I found myself watching the fishies in the morning.. it was a long day the day before. Had to kill some buttmonkeys who tried to scam rich families. They were poor.. but no matter to me, i work for those that pay most. Than again, the ones with that are poor put on much more of a fight than those rich bastards that scream for mercy. They tend to keep my job "interesting".



After a few hours of peace and harmony... and lots of fishies. I moved myself like a shadow towards a small town nearby. I have a great ability to blend in and not being noticed when i wish.. but not today, i didnt feel like blending in to much. Bad choice as i ran into this young woman who bumped into me. She pulled me with her into a small corner where we could not be seen. Obiviously i could have escaped but something in her eyes kept me nailed to the ground. Her eyes spoke of desperate feelings and sadness.



She threw herself at me and started crying. Not knowing realy what to do with it.. i simply hugged her back. After some minutes she stopped and looked up at me. "Are you the famous sin that everyone talks about? the one with No name? That can move like a shadow?" she asked. "Maybe.. depends whos asking" i responded to her. "Please, you have to help me" she cried, "my brothers and sisters, my parents and my friends... even my fiance was killed by this horrible Crimson skull person! Please avenge them for me, i cant find peace... i'll give you everything i have". She told me the cruel way all those arround her were killed by this person when they were travelling from tengu village. I said that I was sorry but that i had to think about it first, i dont just take any job. I told her that i'll find her when my mind was made up and shadow stepped away from where i was. From a distance I saw her drop on her knees and cry again...



I went back to my fishies.. and thought about what she asked of me. While i was sitting there something inside broke.. i couldnt just stay cold bout the way she told me this... and her eyes touched me in a way no one ever did before... so i returned to her. Bringing her the message: "i shall kill, crush and destroy this demon". She gave me the name of this demon.. apparently he was known to people in this village. No one dare to speak his name out loud afraid of his wraith. But eventualy i found a old smitty that wasnt afraid of saying his name and where i could find him.



I started the hunt... staying almost invisible to people or monsters not paying attention. I found his tracks near the village mountain.. together with a camp fire and a few... well... now dead skull friends of his i gues. They didnt see me coming and my blades made them drop like flies. They never made a sound other than the sound of them dropping on the grass. I love this job...

I continued my search, did some spying on Crimson skull groups. After 3 days i finaly got to know where this evil was... He was on the road, traveling to his master at the harbour. To bad for him, he will never get there... By noon that day i picked up his trail and found the bastard... feeling strong alone with no companions... the less people to kill or to see... the better. Thats how i keep my legend alive.. no one will ever live to tell.



well well well, the "Feng the skull symbol" is on the road... and all alone. I sharpen my daggers some more, check if my poison that could kill a bear in less than 1 second, was applied to my daggers well. Then i made my move... this is the moment ive been looking for... revenge can sometimes be sweet... like pie.



A shadow step and a quick of my blades... no one will ever know what happend to him..

Death can be a sweet thing to those that cant stand pain.. but i took my time for this guy... crippling him first.. i took his ability to move. I wanted to look into the eyes of a killer that does it for no good reason.. even when he was down on the ground he smiled at me. His last words were "you will be hunted for this.. mark my words...". Then i did my job and finished him..



I stretched my arms a bit and felt happy with my work. Yes, you have gotta admire your work a bit as a sin, you dont get a chance like this every day. Mostly you have got guards breathing over your neck when you kill someone. But this time it was a bit diffrent. I made a desiscion there that would change my life.. Im not gonna kill for the money anymore... im gonna help people like this woman.



I never returned to the woman with the news that I killed him... but Im sure the news will get through fast enough.. afterall... he was a known enemy and feared by many. And so I keep up the legend that ive made arround me. I am a legend... but when you need me most.. I will be there.

Another great day in my life.. another day in the shadows.. we shall see what tomorrow brings. Remember, you can run.. but you cant hide for me.. if you are cruel to the world.. so will I be to you when I visit you...



Shadows and death till the end.

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End part 1

by: Spawny

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Hope you like it a bit :>
try not to mind my spelling to much :p

~ Spawny <3


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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  isla mann (Lea) on Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:28 pm

Very Happy I loved it spawny this was realy great and the picys are ace well done this is just the sort of thing that i would like to see onthe forum well done spawny Very Happy Very Happy Laters Lea
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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  Becca (lea) on Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:41 am

That was wonderful....and the pics..wish i could do that...u are very good storyteller, can't wait for part 2!

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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  Spawny on Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:02 am

well ty : x

I dunno if im such a good story teller Smile but i do my best. Its not hard to make this btw Smile everyone can ^.^

thnx for the comments Smile i appriciate it

~ Spawny <3
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Sins Tale Part 2

Post  Spawny on Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:56 am

Sins tale... (part 2) by Spawny (RoarRr)
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Intro
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My story begins in the long lost and dark temple of Scarf... a 1 000 years after the jade wind. Being a lost and forgotten temple brings along that no one remembers it excists, people regard it as a legend or a myth. Though this temple was once used by an evil warlock that was vanquished by the Guild of light, his spirit still lingers... waiting for an oppertunity for revenge.



After so many years... sound once again flew through the halls carried by the wind. Someone was coming to this long lost temple...
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A strange person moved throught he halls, walking rather fast... and yet... not making any noice at all. Like a ghost or a shade.



"Aaah, at last... the altar of scarf himself... my journey has finaly come to an end.. or will it just start?" The voice sounds low and full of hate and anger. Slowly we gain view of the person looking at the altar. Darkness is arround this person... like he absorbs all light arround him. His eyes speak of a dark life, pain, torment and most of all.. hatred.

He moves towards the altar and drops on his knees and makes a wound in his hand so blood drops on the floor.



"Great scarf warlock, your servant is here, show yourself!". The air become ice cold and all went to deadly silent... his breath seemes so loud that he thought it could cause an avalanche.
The a portal appeared infront of him releasing a chained spirit.



A heavy voice spoke to him: "Who dares to disturb me in my slumber!!?". The spirit looked down to see who it was that had the guts to wake him. "Aaaah, i see you survived the ages my loyal servant" The person doesnt move a muscle and keeps his face turned towards the ground. "Rise my friend, you dont have to give me that crap of servant and master, Scarf both gave us the power to dominate the world". Then, for the first time the person lifts his face up and looks at the spirit. "I see that you have grown stronger while i was inprissoned, how long have i been chained here?" "1 000 years my lord, no one even remembers this place or even thinks of you. We are legends now." The person gets up and looks arround, "the temple on the other hand is still here which made me return to you." The spirit looks arround aswell, "yeeeeeessss... things have changed alright, but now that im half released of my binding spell... we can finish our quest!"

A long conversation is held between the spirit of a vanquished warlock and an unknown person. Certainly it seems that both posses enormous powers. Its a known fact that the warlock had the ability to erase whole villages by just blinking his eyes, he never showed respect to anyone.. and yet hes not looking down on the person before him... is this a bad sign? Who is this person? More importantly... what are his intentions to awake the warlock, and break part of the seal that kept him locked up. Who ever he is.. it doesnt look good for the land of Cantha.



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Written by: Spawny

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Its a small part... but i hope you like it.

It can still change though... If you think something isnt good or you find mistakes in my grammar and stuff, dont hesitate to tell me. Im not perfect.
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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  Spawny on Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:57 am

Btw, im seeing that my picture disapeared out of the first post, is just on my screen or did they actualy disapear? : x
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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  Elona Beowulf [lea] on Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:53 pm

all pictures appear present and correct to me spawny
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Post  Spawny on Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:00 pm

Yes i just noticed myself that they are back... what on earth O_o

Strange forum :p
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Sin tale part 3

Post  Spawny on Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:43 am

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Sin part 3: Unknown force..
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Our story starts again in the same temple as the previous part ended. The temple of scarf,

a long forgotten God. Yet another person is taking steps through this long forgotten

place... like you could say since the mysterious person came through it became more

attractive to others. Slowly the footsteps come closer and we come to look on a female

rituelist. Apparently drawn here by the spiritual forces that have been released once

more.



Rituelist: This is the place where the enormous energy is coming from... its been calling

me for 4 days now... what is it that makes come here. I never knew this place existed.

The rituelist walks up to the altar and starts looking arround. All of a sudden she heares

a voice behind her. She jumps and turn arround. She sees no one.

Rituelist: Someone there!?! Show yourself!!!

She started to move into one of the long corridors.. looking in every corner. Yet she

didnt find anything or anyone. When she was about to turn arround and go back to the altar

of scarf she saw a person standing at the entrance of the temple. She knew this person.

The rituelist ran up to the person and greeted him.



Rit: I didnt think i'd be seeing you in this forsaken place.
sin: I could say the same about you.. you shouldnt be here.
Rit: why is that? because i carry one of the powers that bound the warlock here?
Sin: ye... that and the fact that you know i dont want to lose you...
Rit: I can take care of myself ty very much, this power makes me capable to protect me

better then the best mages in the world... even shiro couldnt take me on.
Sin: its what i fear for you... you will one day meet someone with greater power... and if

I...we lose you. That warlock will be a step closer to freedom. You know I.. we cant ..
Rit: .. i dont care. I havent been here since ages.. but some time back i got this feeling

of great and tremendous power in this place.
Sin: I felt it too.. i felt the warlock, though he is bound to this place someone must

still have summoned him as there was a peak the power i felt.
Rit: exacly... and thats what im here to find out.
Sin: i've secured the whole temple 10 times now.. i turned every stone.. i found nothing

or no one. No one has been here in ages.
Rit: ... and yet i feel that someone must have.. i know you felt it too.. something with

more power then that warlock ever had... Someone has been here
Sin: maybe.. i cant tell for sure. We should leave, and you should report to the elders..
Rit: i am an elder.. want me to report to myself?
Sin: thats not what i meant..
rit: i know, i know... you care for me.. then why did you leave me?
sin: ... this conversation is over.

The sin disapeared into the shadows and the rituelist was all alone again..
Ignore the advice and request of the sin, she head back into the temple. Arriving at the

altar of scarf a creepy feeling coverd her skin, bringing every hair on her body to stand

up. The rituelist knew the would have to fight... the warlock was here and she was stupid

enough to come here.

Activating her power everything started to lighten up arround her. She screamed: Come out

WARLOCK YOU CANT BEAT ME, YOU DO NOT HAVE THE POWER TO BEAT ME ANYMORE.



Deadly silence but the feeling stayed... she looked in every direction.. all of a sudden

she gets pulled onto her knees by an unknown force... She drops on the floor, having need

of all her capabilities of staying from the floor itself.

An icecold and creepy voice carried by the wind reaches her

"Hahahahaha... stupid stupid stupid little elder... did you realy think i would try

something if i couldnt win? ... hahahahahha"

Infront of her the floor opens and starts spilling out some sort of cold fire.. it crawls

up to her like it was a living flame... seeking its prey.



She tries to move but the unknown force keeps her locked to the floor. The flame has now reached her and is burning

his way through her aura.. the aura that would resist anyone and anything is being

pulverised by the flame.. like its getting eaten.

"hahhaa did you realy think your pathetic power would stop me... im going to consume you..

your power.. your body.. your mind for some info...but not your soul... no... that im

gonna keep with me.. and i shall torment you! hahahahaha"

Rituelst: NOOO go away you vile demon! you shall not win!!!!

"hahaha.. you think by heating up your power you will escape.. let me tell you something..

there is no escape from me... hahhahaa!"

Rituelst: nooooo... i ... cant... take this... anymore... i .. will...warn...th...

The rituelist drops down.. and is consumed by the dark/cold flames.



"hahaha hmmm she does taste kinda good.. to bad i promised myself i was gonna torment this

one.. she would have been a great puppit."



Far far away... a sin looks up... and feels his heart turn into cold... the name of his

love is formed by his lips but no sound leaves his mouth: Lisa Rai!




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Written by: Mahow/Spawny

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Hope you like it. Part 4 is in making.
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Post  Becca (lea) on Mon Jul 06, 2009 4:26 pm

Wow...good story, excellent job! Hurry up on next part, i wanna see if Lisa Rai died.

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Re: A Sin's tale...

Post  Spawny on Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:23 pm

hate to bring it to ya, but for the moment shes dead : x and you wont hear from her straight away i gues... not cos of the story line or so but cos my laptop died like the night from saturday on sunday. Hard drive gave the ghost and is off to the ever lasting hard drive lands. may his HDD RIP.

anyways, hope it was indeed fun reading. Im on my moms pc right now and all the pictures i made look screwed up dark and very bad. While on my laptop they looked great and nicely colored... hope you guys see them with enough color and that this pc is just beyond repairing.


oh well, i gues i'll be seeing you guys when i have time and money to repair the whole sh!t. Untill then.. cheers y'all.

- Mahow


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Post  Spawny on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:22 pm

update on the pc problem:

Got myself a new hard drive, now we shall see if it will keep up and stay alive. Pray with me :p

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