The poem I made that made me an offical published poet.

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The poem I made that made me an offical published poet.

Post  Tapion on Fri May 22, 2009 7:12 pm

I made this poem last year and most of it was a off the top of my head and went through and revised it. The poems and art in the book was anonymously selected by different students and teachers and one of mine made it in. I personally didn't think it was that good but I guess others did; also so there is no confusion, I made this during christmas. Well, enough talking, here it is.

"Reds and greens with extravagant smiles inhabit the earth.
Love and kindness leap from the earth to the moon
like a chocolate colored deer prancing in the
green pine scented forest.
Reds, blues, greens, and yellows
flash and twinkle, mimicking
the heavens in the frost-bitten darkness.
Hot chocolate toasts my throat
begging me to relax.
Glass lights with, of course, Sant and his sleigh.
The wait dwindles like a water drop
patiently releasing it's grip on the ice-covered cone.
Boxes, ribbons, and bows swarm the defenseless
tree as children attempt to peak.
The constant wait is over and done.
Mom, Dad, it's Christmas."


Well, that sums it up, strait out of the book and exactly how I wrote it, hope you guys enjoyed it.


Last edited by Tapion on Sat May 30, 2009 7:55 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : To make a few changes.)

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Post  Spawny on Fri May 22, 2009 9:36 pm

Cheers for the nice poem
Gratz on the part of getting it published
Keep up the good work

I like well written poems and you did good job there.
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Post  Becca (lea) on Fri May 22, 2009 9:48 pm

That was great, Tappy...well written and i really liked the images you came up with! Keep up the good work, its not everybody who gets published at such a young age.

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Post  Spawny on Sat May 30, 2009 3:01 pm

I wanted to add a poem but i wasnt sure if i could do it in dutch....

but i am Very Happy (i'll put a translation prolly later on)

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Pruimen boom
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Jantje zag eens pruimen hangen
Als eieren zo groot

wou plukken
mocht niet

was braaf
kreeg hoedje vol

Very Happy

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the end :p
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For those that dont understand yet ^^ its a kids poem that i know for a very long time and i still think its funny to say it ^_^
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